Matilda/Matilda

Recently, my husband and I watched the 1994 film The Professional (or Leon, The Professional), extended director’s cut. He picked it out of a list of 50 best movies to watch. I’d never watched it and neither had he.

Although, about two thirds of the way through, he thought that maybe he had watched it, but he thought it had been titled “Matilda.”

Which made me think about the 1996 film Matilda, based on the popular children’s book written by Roald Dahl in 1988.

You see, both films had very similar setups for their young heroines, although the movies themselves were very (VERY) different.

Both Matildas had parents that were not interested in them, were self-centered and even cruel. In The Professional, the young heroine is told to go get food (it seems that is a regular task for her) for the family; in Matilda, the main character is always tasked with making dinner for her parents. There are similarities in the parents, too, but that may have just been that they were made in the 1990s (the parents fighting, the New York accents, the tank-style undershirts the father’s wore over their beer bellies.) In Matilda, though, the girl only has an older brother; in The Professional, she is the middle child of three.

In both movies, the parents don’t seem to care if their daughter goes to school, although in The Professional, the girl runs away from school and the parents don’t seem to question her being home, while in Matilda, the parents actively deride going to school and think it’s a waste of time. Corruption play a big part in both plots, although The Professional is the more violent (drugs and murder) as it is meant for an adult audience, although, what happens in Matilda (corrupt car deals and the school punishments) would be horrible for a child to endure.

In The Professional, Matilda rebels by swearing and smoking (it is a movie for adults), while in Matilda, Matilda rebels by going to school and loving to read books (kind of a backwards take, but it is a Roald Dahl story for children) and eventually takes revenge on her family in non-bloody ways.

In The Professional, is is the neighbor, a hit man (or a cleaner), who rescues the young girl and trains her to be a cleaner, so she can take vengeance against the men who killed her 4-year old brother (she doesn’t really care that they shot her abusive parents or older sister.)

In Matilda, it is her kind, book-loving teacher that eventually saves her (the whole point of the story leads to her being adopted by the teacher).

I find it interesting that both films have young girls named Matilda with similar characteristics and situations. I would guess that the screenwriter of The Professional read Roald Dahl’s tale, and created a similar character in a gritty adult film. After all, if just looking at the films, The Professional came out first, but the book predates both films.

I think the characters of Matilda in each of these films illustrates an important aspect of audience in storytelling. Thought these characters are very similar (even down to their straight dark-brown bob haircut and big brown eyes), their circumstances are what set the stories apart and what makes it appropriate for the audience (adults or children.)

Have you watched these movies? And have you noticed the similarities in these Matildas (as well as their differences)?

I won an Award!

Like Second Skin, my science-fiction semi-dystopic military novel, won two third-place awards from The BookFest Fall 2025; Fiction Romance – Science Fiction and Fiction Sci-Fi – Military.

This was the first manuscript I ever completed to “the end”. And it sat around for over two decades waiting for me to finish editing and rewriting parts of it. My kid read it in their late teens and liked it. I knew I should publish it, but over that two-decade it sat stagnant, I figured it had “aged” and would need some updates.

A year ago, I read it from end to end, and I found that I thought the story held and really just needed some minor updating.

So I completed those edits and updates and published it through DreamPunk Press early this year.

And submitted it for The BookFest awards early this fall.

I really hadn’t expected much; I consider it part of my early writing, when I was still learning and weak in my storytelling. Maybe that was just my imposter syndrome making itself known, and now I think I should read more of my early unpublished writing (much of it is short stories, like “Guilty Conscience”, that I also revisited and was accepted by Tundra Swan Press for its anthology, The Haunted Zone.)

Time to go and revisit those writing archives.

Like Second Skin (a novel)

This is a sci-fi novel that was published earlier this month (4 March 2025), and I forgot to post about it. Go me! Honestly, so much was happening that it’s not a big surprise that I forgot.

In 2114, the future is bright and the world is burning.

Kaalinda is studying botany to rebuild her family’s farming legacy, but making it work in this scorched world.

When she’s drafted into the CFoR, it offers an opportunity to seek vengeance against the rebels that destroyed her home, her community, her family.

Not a typical recruit–more petite, not as strong or as fast–she passes the initial test.

She’s not the only person who notices that she’s different. Someone thinks she shouldn’t have been recruited in the first place, someone thinks she has ulterior motives. And they intend to make sure she fails out—or dies—before training is complete.

~~Determine to be the RIGHT in the WORLD~~

The first draft of this novel was finished so long ago (I am not actually going to use the number because it’s been so long). I was taking a creative writing course (like, the fourth one from this professor) and he told me I wasn’t going to get a passing grade unless I finished the manuscript (I’d been workshopping the first few chapters in class for a while).

So I did, and I got an A.

He told me that he pushed for “THE END” because too many writers get mired in the weeds of edits and never finish – and he wanted me to finish.

I’m sure he never imagined it would take me this long to finish the edits and get it out into the world.

Interested in purchasing? You can buy it directly from the publisher (DreamPunk Press) or from your favorite LOCAL bookseller (they may need to order it for you). And as always, if you do read it, let me know what you think.

Snake Eyes won 2 awards!!!

I have a couple of pen names, and Zahra Jons/Z. A. Jons is my pen name for contemporary-style fiction. I have won several awards for this type of fiction, and maybe I should stick to only this pen name, but I just love writing in other genres, too.

Anyway, besides earning that “get it” checkmark at Kirkus, it just won 1st place (!!!) for Romance – Military at The BookFest Fall 2024! It also won 2nd place in Chick Lit.

If you are interested in getting your own copy of Snake Eyes, it is available from DreamPunk Press, Bookshop, Barnes and Noble, and Amazon.